Adequate. Linework was a bit heavy in a lot of spots, particular the tentacles I think, but overall it was good. I'm a little taken aback by the colouring. Perhaps it's the sky and the way that almost sickly green that backdrops the vividly purple tentacle monster. I do have to point out the way the breasts are positioned on the female character is a little off. In this same the eyes are a bit awkward too. The other s are fine and actually much more appealing. It's able, but for me just so. The storyline is typical, and the artist doesn't even bother really. The redneck kinda of joke with the tentacle monster was actually pretty interesting and quite comedical. There's a sense of sarcasm or something in the dialogue, but I can't seem to pin it down. The green bird is surprisingly funny, his comment is also a reflection of every female protagonist in every comic involving rape.
It's ing grade. 4/10
-Onion
Adequate. Linework was a bit heavy in a lot of spots, particular the tentacles I think, but overall it was good. I'm a little taken aback by the colouring. Perhaps it's the sky and the way that almost sickly green that backdrops the vividly purple tentacle monster. I do have to point out the way the breasts are positioned on the female character is a little off. In this same the eyes are a bit awkward too. The other s are fine and actually much more appealing. It's able, but for me just so. The storyline is typical, and the artist doesn't even bother really. The redneck kinda of joke with the tentacle monster was actually pretty interesting and quite comedical. There's a sense of sarcasm or something in the dialogue, but I can't seem to pin it down. The green bird is surprisingly funny, his comment is also a reflection of every female protagonist in every comic involving rape.
It's ing grade. 4/10
-Onion