For those of you who don't know this, there's an older version of this on this authors Pixiv. To compare this and the original, the original had Marcolin and Hans dating, they break up during a fight which imo was a bit overblown, Hans ends up with the French girl, Marcolin gets addicted to drugs, has a miscarriage, gets recovery, tries to apologize but gets blocked by the French girl and eventually moves away to Italy to run the family mafia. The original at the beginning had some nice elements similar to this version, but I feel like it got a bit too complicated and kinda ended things for dumb reasons and prevented reconciliation for dumb reasons.
So far, I am kinda preferring this reboot. Hans and Marcolin aren't a couple but it's likely things may go in that direction, The French girl is much more likeable and not nearly as possessive and for the story at this point is a lot more grounded and conflicts are so far dealt with reasonably.
I hope the author keeps this more laid back and less dramatic tone. Good porn with a good story.
For those of you who don't know this, there's an older version of this on this authors Pixiv. To compare this and the original, the original had Marcolin and Hans dating, they break up during a fight which imo was a bit overblown, Hans ends up with the French girl, Marcolin gets addicted to drugs, has a miscarriage, gets recovery, tries to apologize but gets blocked by the French girl and eventually moves away to Italy to run the family mafia. The original at the beginning had some nice elements similar to this version, but I feel like it got a bit too complicated and kinda ended things for dumb reasons and prevented reconciliation for dumb reasons.
So far, I am kinda preferring this reboot. Hans and Marcolin aren't a couple but it's likely things may go in that direction, The French girl is much more likeable and not nearly as possessive and for the story at this point is a lot more grounded and conflicts are so far dealt with reasonably.
I hope the author keeps this more laid back and less dramatic tone. Good porn with a good story.